Vampire Shade Vampire Shade Collection 1 Vivienne Neas 9788826422398 Books
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The Shade a Vampire has left in my family is still hunting me, making my life a restless chase. It's not only my job, I have a personal vendetta to carry out against vampires. They are the reason my sister is on a wheelchair and our mother gone. And I'm not a forgiving girl. Get even better value for money when you purchase the Vampire's Shade Discounted Box Set Vampires start integrating among humans, but even with laws adapting to the new society, many problems arise. I solve them. I kill problems. In the span of less than two weeks I manage to turn my entire world upside down. This time I have been chosen to take care of some human turned into vampire, but that will not be as easy as it seemed. I have somehow gotten involved in a war against the ancients ones, too dangerous and powerful enemies to fight by myself. And before I could even think about it I find myself allied with a very unlikely team. At the end of it all, they're the ones that save me. I've been fooling myself for years. It turns out I was the rescue mission all along.
Vampire Shade Vampire Shade Collection 1 Vivienne Neas 9788826422398 Books
If I chose books based on cover photos, I'd never have downloaded Vampire's Shade. Could it be any cheesier? It looks like they're trying to hook hormonal high school boys.This story is riddled with errors, more than I've seen in a long time, which is a real shame. I found myself constantly backtracking to try to deduce the author's meaning because of odd phrasing (ex: "It hadn't been a hell of a job, and there'd always been a little torn."), missing words and punctuation, and misused words. Clearly, this book wasn't edited before publication and it shows. Errors show up on every other page. Some people don't care about this stuff, and don't even notice it. It was a real problem for me. 2 stars as is.
For content only, Vampire's Shade deserves 3.5 stars, perhaps 4 stars. The story is involving and the characters were interesting. Parts of the plot could have been fleshed out more. We got only bare details about Connor's illegal business or why the master vampires wanted it. Since that was pivotal, more about that would have been helpful.
Neas may not be Jeaniene Frost or Laurell K. Hamilton, but her writing is very promising. I really hope she finds a good editor. I'd love to revise my review after editing.
p.s. I just looked at the listing, and amazingly, this book lists an editor. Unbelievable. They should be fired. And she should demand a refund.
ETA 6-8-16: I was just notified that this was re-edited, so I downloaded it again to take another look. What a difference a good editor makes! In the first chapter, I only noticed one misspelled word, one or two missing words, and one slightly awkward turn of phrase. Trust me, that's nothing compared to the original release. The story now has the polish it deserves, and it flows like it should. If you have the original, download the new one and compare. It's impressive.
3.5 stars, rounded up to 4, because hey, the author responded and acted. Thanks on behalf of all of us.
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Vampire Shade Vampire Shade Collection 1 Vivienne Neas 9788826422398 Books Reviews
This story had adventure and action!!! I felt some parts were a little rushed. It was well written and did not have a bunch of repeats, which in my opinion says a lot!!! It was easy to read and not terribly slow. I felt there could have been more to the story. It almost felt more like a novella, where they give you the bones of the story but leave out a good share of the meat.
I'm conflicted about this book. The first half of the book was really boring and I almost gave up but it started to get better. The ending was pretty good but I don't think there was enough characters development, I could have cared less about any of them. Unless you have nothing better to read I would skip this book.
Good story, but there was a sexual event for 8-10 pages every chapter. After first one I just skipped ahead. After 1/2 the book I got tired of using sex in any shape or form to do the job. Wish I could give it more, the writing was better, but the loaded-on sex just got tiresome unless you like that sort of thing.
Adele is one-half vampire because of her father. Her father had murdered her mother and put her younger sister in a wheel-chair (the only reason her sister is still alive is because Adele stopped her father from finishing what he started). Now, she has a vendetta against all vampires and works for a shady businessman who takes contracts to snuff-out vampires. Adele sees a newly changed vampire unconscious in an alley with the sun's rays about to hit him (that would have been his ending). For some reason she saves him from being destroyed and this is the real start of the story. While there are too many typos to warrant five stars I did enjoy the storyline and although it is the start of a series, there isn't a cliff-hanger. I wish all authors would make their books "stand alone" as Ms. Neas does in this novel.
As this is part of a series, I can only hope that this is laying the groundwork for more in depth character and world building. While there was plenty of action and some interpersonal relationships, for the most part, I just didn't feel the closeness that Adele had with the people surrounding her, especially Connor. Yes, she seemed close with her sister, but a lot of that seemed more out of a sense of guilt as opposed to love. I did appreciate that even being a supposed badass slayer, she had serious flaws emotionally. Not to mention her realization that she was never going to be equipped to fight the monsters she was up against. I also appreciated the fact that she did learn to accept all the parts of herself. I am curious if she continues to grow as a person, so I most likely will read the next book to see how the story progresses.
I downloaded Vampire's Shade as a free book from . I had a love-hate relationship with this read. Part of it due to the cover which makes no sense with the plot-- what's with those wings and holey tights?
For some reason, Adele's personality, speech, and sayings reminded me of other young, vampire-slayer characters-- all attitude and self-reflection. I'll admit, I enjoyed the plot, and secondary characters, even if I found the protagonists unremarkable. The story was well-paced, and thoughtful. I think my dislike is the cookie-cutter heroine-- a compilation of other, similar vampire-slayers. I can't say I was too impressed with Connor, either. Nor did I ever really get a sense of the attraction between the two. Their relationship seemed contrived, rather than a natural progression of events.
There's a lot of potential here, and I'm willing to bet this is a series that will improve as the writer hits her stride with the characters.
There were a lot of mistakes in this book and some sentences were completely baffling with wording, some words were missing or spelled wrong and it was really hard to figure out what the author meant. The story itself was very interesting and intriguing so overall I thought it was a really great book if you can overlook the mistakes. I hope that someone proof reads the next book as I think Vivienne Neas has a talent for writing. I always give first time writers second chances especially when I see greatness to entertain readers like this author.
If I chose books based on cover photos, I'd never have downloaded Vampire's Shade. Could it be any cheesier? It looks like they're trying to hook hormonal high school boys.
This story is riddled with errors, more than I've seen in a long time, which is a real shame. I found myself constantly backtracking to try to deduce the author's meaning because of odd phrasing (ex "It hadn't been a hell of a job, and there'd always been a little torn."), missing words and punctuation, and misused words. Clearly, this book wasn't edited before publication and it shows. Errors show up on every other page. Some people don't care about this stuff, and don't even notice it. It was a real problem for me. 2 stars as is.
For content only, Vampire's Shade deserves 3.5 stars, perhaps 4 stars. The story is involving and the characters were interesting. Parts of the plot could have been fleshed out more. We got only bare details about Connor's illegal business or why the master vampires wanted it. Since that was pivotal, more about that would have been helpful.
Neas may not be Jeaniene Frost or Laurell K. Hamilton, but her writing is very promising. I really hope she finds a good editor. I'd love to revise my review after editing.
p.s. I just looked at the listing, and amazingly, this book lists an editor. Unbelievable. They should be fired. And she should demand a refund.
ETA 6-8-16 I was just notified that this was re-edited, so I downloaded it again to take another look. What a difference a good editor makes! In the first chapter, I only noticed one misspelled word, one or two missing words, and one slightly awkward turn of phrase. Trust me, that's nothing compared to the original release. The story now has the polish it deserves, and it flows like it should. If you have the original, download the new one and compare. It's impressive.
3.5 stars, rounded up to 4, because hey, the author responded and acted. Thanks on behalf of all of us.
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